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Post by CiCi on Apr 27, 2012 13:13:10 GMT -5
Delete or lock thread please.
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Post by Superfish on Apr 27, 2012 14:08:17 GMT -5
honestly, there isn't much criticism to be made.. i mean sure, lots of improvements could be made, but i mean heck, your not a famous author who has written 20 novels. Heck, i liked it, and it kept my attention pretty well
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Post by CiCi on Apr 27, 2012 14:10:02 GMT -5
honestly, there isn't much criticism to be made.. i mean sure, lots of improvements could be made, but i mean heck, your not a famous author who has written 20 novels. Heck, i liked it, and it kept my attention pretty well Who says I haven't written 20 novels? LOLJKIWISH! Thank you c: |
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