Revolution: A Jupiter/Saturn Fan Fic

[Lori☾]

"Look, Saturn, have you ever read the book 'She's Just Not That in to you?' I mean, it's Jupiter for Christ's sake," Mars emphasized to Saturn. Ever since a few days ago, he had been doing nothing but drooling after Jupiter. He was Mars's friend and she knew Jupiter well enough to say she wouldn't even look at any man, at all. She was too… proud perhaps? Sighing, she walked out of their office, leaving a sad Saturn behind.

Saturn didn't like the way things were looking. His chances of ever coming close to befriending the attractive commander, Jupiter were extremely slim. She was tall, thin and beautiful with an attitude while he was a reserved guy with not one thing to offer her. Saturn let out a stressed breath and focused back on his assignment that Master Cyrus had given them. Of course Jupiter has finished hers already because she's so smart… He mentally kicked himself; thinking about her like that wasn't aiding his cause. As soon as he had finished his thoughts of her, the woman stormed into the room and sat down at the desk across from him. Jupiter looked frustrated and disturbed by something.

Jupiter looked up to see Saturn staring at her. With an irritated tone, she barked,

"Well what are you staring at?"

Saturn gulped and averted his gaze from her. God he liked her but he hated being around the Commander when she was pissed off. Probably some stupid grunt had set her off… It wasn't that difficult to piss Jupiter off these days. Hell, seeing her in a good mood meant she was either drunk or she had just killed someone. As he finished up his assignment, he got up to go turn it in when Jupiter spoke to him.

"Don't you just love the authority we have over Team Galactic?"

He paused before answering. Yes, he did enjoy it but not near as much as she did. Her tone was filled with power and lust. He answered simply and quietly,

"I do like it yes."

Jupiter scoffed at his quiet tone. The man needed to nut up and speak. He was so beep quiet and it drove her insane! A part of her thought his quietness was kind of cute but there was no way in hell she would ever admit that. She couldn't believe she was even thinking he was cute at all in the first place! She mentally shuddered at the thought. What was she turning into? Some soft, mushy gushy wimp? Heck no. She refused to allow any kind of emotion into her system. After all, she was Jupiter, the most feared commander of all Team Galactic!



I know it sucks xD feel free to comment!

[musicalbox]

Ooh, very interesting! ^__^ Keep up the great work, Cate!

[Lori☾]

<333 thanks Music

[DigiDice]

i really like it ;D! are you going to right more?

[Lori☾]

I plan to! <3

[Jack]

And then Jack ran in and butchered them both with a chainsaw...
Jokes...
Anyways, Good work

[Lori☾]

D8

poor Jupiter XC


lol

[Darkrai87]

Very nice, keep up the good work.

[Lori☾]

thanks D87 <3

[Fusion]

Hehe, this is quite good hope to see some more

[Lori☾]

i plan to write more <33

[Fusion]

Yay

[ratminer]

Nice lol, it's pretty good

[Lori☾]

haha graciasss~

[Darkrai87]

Wow and that's comng from a master short story writer too! You should see some of his work in the creative writing section. They're the best stories in the world!

[Lori☾]

I know I saw them! I loved them alll!

[Lori☾]

Jupiter’s pretty features twisted into a devious smirk as she watched the grunts scatter as she past them in the hall.

Intimidation was such a marvelous thing. Not one person dared to oppose her. Sometimes even Cyrus is hesitant about what he says around Jupiter. She also noticed that Saturn almost said nothing at all to her, probably for that reason. Jupiter sighed and knocked on Mars’s door. Earlier, she had seen her talking to Saturn and wondered if he had mentioned her.

“Jupiter? What is it?”

“Nothing much Mars, I just wanted to ask you a few questions,” Jupiter smiled shortly, something she only did around her commander friends. They were her only friends, actually.

“So what’s up Jupi,” Mars questioned. She did have an idea what this was about. Mars seemed to know about everyone’s relationship status. If they were dating or crushing or whatever, she knew. Saturn had it pretty bad for the lavender haired Commander but she just didn’t know if Jupiter would be a good match for him. She was aggressive and feared while he tended to be submissive and many grunts didn’t fear him at all.

“Keep in mind this is very hypothetical…”

“Sure, sure…”

“Um… What if you uh, liked someone who was a polar opposite of you? What do you do? They are super quiet and finicky and you are fiery and aggressive…” beep, way too obvious. Mars’s face was priceless as she looked back at Jupiter.

“Jupi, I know you like Saturn. It’s pretty obvious, every time he comes around you lose focus or your eyes get all googly,” Mars explained. She laughed a little bit as Jupiter blushed at her bad ‘hypothetical’ example of her crush. The poor woman had no idea how to continue with these feelings.

Jupiter sighed and glanced down. She had a feeling he felt the same way about her. There were numerous time she had caught him looking at her or staring. Sometimes if they were alone he’d try to inch closer to her. Of course Jupiter ignored these little happenings until now. Now she wished he’d do it more.

“I’ve noticed his actions towards me but I haven’t seemed to care up until now,” Jupiter explained. She was very confused which was a rare thing. She looked up as Saturn walked into their office and took his seat across from her.

Saturn glanced at the lavender haired commander sitting on top of her desk across from his. Her long legs hung off the side and she had her weight rested on her left arm, leaving her right arm on her hip. He snapped out of his daze and realized she had been watching him the whole time. Great, I’m in for a beating… Surprisingly, Jupiter did nothing of the sort, instead she moved from the desk to her chair without a word.

Jupiter was beaming on the inside. He was obviously attracted to her after that display right there. She whipped around, irritated as a piece of paper came and hit her. It had come from Mars, who was sitting behind her wearing a silly smirk on her face. Jupiter rolled her eyes at the childlike action and opened the paper to read:

‘You know that uniform you wear isn’t helping his cause at all!’

Jupiter quickly looked over her uniform. What about it? Ignoring the stupid remark, she got back to work.

[Darkrai87]

Great job.

[Lori☾]

thanks. haha

[Fusion]

hehe, this is really well writen, gets the view of someone with a crush across very well (and i should know, i was like that for the last few days :3)