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Post by Follow on Mar 17, 2012 16:17:52 GMT -5
-----Hello everyone knowing me, i'm always writing or drawing. ----Anywho, this story i will write and you will love it! ---Yes, i had to make an introduction this way. --No, i hate cheese. -Thanks~
"Normal Speaking" "Inner Self Speaking" 'Thinking' Flashback -Action-
"You never were important to me!" he shouted his raven jet black hair falling down on his face. A flash of light and he was gone. 'beep it, he used flash...'
'...speed' I drew out my katana and prepared for the battle. -floosh- I spun on the heel of my left foot and blocked. A clanging sound rang out and i blinked. "Nice moves" he said and he swung his sword again.
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Post by Jack on Mar 17, 2012 16:22:21 GMT -5
Awesome as always.
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Post by Darkrai87 on Mar 18, 2012 11:39:07 GMT -5
Very nice start, hoping to see more.
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Post by Syan 3 Point Oh on Mar 22, 2012 10:40:28 GMT -5
Write more! O;
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Post by CiCi on Apr 27, 2012 9:18:04 GMT -5
It's an okay start. c: Why do you go "-floosh-" instead of using descriptive words? I don't know, to me, it's like you're taking part of a RP or something.
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Post by Syan 3 Point Oh on Apr 27, 2012 13:13:10 GMT -5
Honestly the style in which she wrote this reminds me of Fanfiction.
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