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Post by Follow on Mar 22, 2011 18:12:08 GMT -5
4098 Our Last Days..
I have often wondered what this world would be like without the aid of pokemonsters... They do everything for us, even the work we wont do. And yet, we subject them to the pain of war. They suffer while we gain fame. We torture them with our pitiful battles. We hurt them so we, as a human kind can show our dominance. I am prepared to go into this world and fi---
A silver tear glazed the page as the young girl reading it broke down, after a few days of searching Lusia had found nothing but this torn page from an excerpt from her father’s letter. At a young age Lusia's father had left her alone with her mother to go fight another pointless war, angered by the fact that her father had died Lusia had becine rash and unreasonable. She argued with everyone and only got along with her Weavile, her trusty partner. The two made an amazing team, they were none as the unbeatable, and thus when they signed up for the army they were accepted.
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Post by Fusion on Mar 22, 2011 18:39:36 GMT -5
Wow, interesting looking forward to more
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Post by Darkrai87 on Mar 22, 2011 19:20:41 GMT -5
Very nice.
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Post by DigiDice on Mar 22, 2011 20:11:16 GMT -5
i like it ;D , and would her dad be a older version of N
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Post by Darkluigi on Mar 23, 2011 10:00:22 GMT -5
I like a Weavile story. Weaviles FTW!
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Post by Jack on Mar 23, 2011 10:36:50 GMT -5
Awesome! Very good work
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Post by ratminer on Mar 23, 2011 16:48:36 GMT -5
pretty good lol btw >>>> they're called pocketmonsters
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Post by Follow on Mar 24, 2011 17:36:01 GMT -5
******************* Day 1 Smacked Around ******************* Lusia and Weavile walked into their dormitory expecting to be immediately recognized, what she didn't expect however were the cold looks coming from the rest of the girls. Turning around she saw a tall built brunette slam the door. An awkward pause descended upon Lusia, "Fresh meat, everyone." The brunette spoke. Lusia's eyes widen as she notice three girls join the brunette and trigger a pokeball each. The pokemon were: Blaziken, Swampert, Castform, and a Machamp. Prepared Lusia commanded her Weavile to use nite slash on the Castform, but the Blaziken got there first and with a fire punch it knocked Lusia's Weavile out. "You Ba******!" Lusia cursed reaching for a second pokeball. SMACK! The Machamp used focus punch on Lusia knocking her through the air into the wall. Aching in pain everywhere Lusia used the window sill to pick herself back up. Rubbing her eyes, she noticed the Castform in from of her. Not knowing what to do Lusia broke down and slid to the floor. "Oh, look girls we made her cry..." the brunette said with a touch of sarcasm. The Castform moved closer and prepared a weather ball, when the door crashed open and a tall man with a black charzard walked in. Immediately the girls triggered their pokemon returning them to their pokeballs.
-End of day 1
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Post by Jack on Mar 24, 2011 17:53:06 GMT -5
Can I be in it?
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Post by Follow on Mar 24, 2011 20:50:13 GMT -5
Sure Jack (:
************ Day 2 Jack?!?! ************ Lusia woke up with a severe pain in her chest from yesterday, glancing around to make sure no one was awake, Lusia crept outta bed and left the dorm rooms. Breathing a sigh of relief Lusia turned the corner and ran into a lieutenant . "Errrr Mam, why are you outta your dorm?" He asked, for minutes Lusia could do nothing but stare into his eyes. "Errrr, Im sorry im going back right now!" Lusia yelled running all the way back to the dorm rooms. Opening the door Lusia came face to face with the brunette and her gang. "Oh, Look it here girls, it's the cry baby." the brunette taunted
-g2g to be continued
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Post by DigiDice on Mar 24, 2011 21:05:57 GMT -5
can i be an umbrion and great story eevee
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Post by Follow on Mar 24, 2011 21:37:22 GMT -5
Sure digi (:
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Post by Jack on Mar 25, 2011 3:02:45 GMT -5
Awesomes Can I haz a gallade for my partner Pokemanz? :3 I'd Like it to be fully black with dark eyes, I'll post A recolor after I'm home from school My avatar
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Post by Follow on Mar 25, 2011 15:03:45 GMT -5
alrighty jack (:
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Post by Jack on Mar 25, 2011 18:02:04 GMT -5
Can't wait to see more :3
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Post by DigiDice on Mar 29, 2011 13:39:21 GMT -5
ya this story's really good will other than you getting beat up
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Post by Jack on Mar 29, 2011 13:58:56 GMT -5
Yea, You always write the first few parts of a great story, but then stop
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Post by Follow on Mar 29, 2011 17:30:33 GMT -5
@jack i havent been on *Pfffft* ***************** Day 2 Jack?!?! Cont... ***************** "Shut up!" Lusia commanded as a furious look crossed her eyes. Pulling out a pokeball she triggered it and sent out her trust Weavile the other girls reacted instantly reaching for their own pokeballs, but Lusia and her Weavile attacked. After mere seconds the rest of the girls lay on the floor bleeding from deep gashes and Lusia called back her Weavile returning him to his home. A gasp sounded behind her and Lusia turned around and saw the man she saw earlier. Lusia's breath left her and she almost collapsed, but the man caught her. "Hey easy there." He said "We wouldn't want to get the colonel involved would we?" Lusia caught her breath and asked "Your not the colonel?" Jack glanced at her and smiled "No im Captain Jack."
-End of day 2
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Post by Fusion on Mar 29, 2011 17:47:22 GMT -5
Very nice as always lusia keep up the good work
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Post by Darkrai87 on Mar 29, 2011 20:33:36 GMT -5
Very nice. xD You know Captain Jack is a song. X3D
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